Boiling Point Poem by SALINI NAIR

Boiling Point

Rating: 4.3


Vapors are in haste
To reach the heights it can
My face won't block its way
But its vigor lapse my vision
Inside the pot it's boiling
The lifeblood of earth in a pot

Its oomph burns its sides
Drops disperse and arrogant
Volatile in its mission
Disorder that rises in sides
Hotness that beyond control
Need to stop it or blaze

Life is like a pot this way
Sometimes volatile and pessimistic
Temper that burn all its sides
Disorder that flood as a stampede
Break the love torment inside
And spread that pearls as it slip on its way! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Wednesday, September 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 September 2014

lovely....so nice thank for share

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 September 2014

Very reflective piece bringing facts of life effectively comparing with a hot pot.......well done Salini

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2014

An interesting comparative study of life along with a hot pot, loved it the way you described.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. Loved the words..... Life is like a pot this way Sometimes volatile and pessimistic Temper that burn all its sides Lovely description of boiling point. Loved it.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 10 September 2014

A beautiful poem which such imaginations of thoughts.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2014

Great thoughts and great message.

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