Body Needs Poem by Young Church Poetry

Body Needs

Rating: 5.0


Shame on you weak body!
From being worthy to being silly!
Turning little angels to adults!
Shame on you weak body!
From being blessed to being greedy!
Truthful hearts to deceitful hearts!

Shame on you! Shame on you!
Angels are watching as you change
Their voices whispering like a waterfall,
‘That is not right! Not right my friend!
That is not you! Not you my friend.’



***The Book of End of Times

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A B Faniki 07 September 2019

Nicely done. Indeed thebody is weak. Thanks for sharing

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Grace Pantaleo 28 April 2013

a very nice poem, it's true, a body doesn't get satisfied and it is not thankful.

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Its a poem on body consciousness...where body gets stimulated by mental greed body is just prey...unfortunate..manage mind..body will behave rightly...this is your message I suppose...Tenner ~ Regards ~ niv ====== Thanks for comment on my poem Invite to read and comment on my poem [read as a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’ or any … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment

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Ebi Robert 13 October 2011

i wonder what would have made this body of yours to be greedy.But all the sm, this good.

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