Bluey Sky Poem by Luke Weinberg

Bluey Sky

Rating: 5.0


i'm standing here alone
wondering who i am
i never thought that i would be a dead man
i can't help but feel the pain
feel the pain of others around me
but now i must survive, that's my plan
i look up at that Bluey sky
where the heavens are up so high
i think to myself everything is ok, no that's a lie
so i sit, i start to cry
i wish there was no more war
and so i start to cry some more
as i slowly pass, i'm somewhere with my family and we're happy
but now i know where i am
so i look down at that Bluey sky
and i am in the heavens, where i'm up so high

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 11 May 2011

A very well crafted and poignant write which shows your great talent to make through the Poetry's World! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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