Blues Trade Poem by Geoffrey Fafard

Blues Trade

Rating: 4.9


Well I slid on down to the crossroads
In the darkest hour of night
I will trade you here on the delta
my soul for to see the light
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I aint no crawling king snake
the wind don't know my name
I been finished with spirit messin
Don't force me to take the blame
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You sung a medley to me of hard times
more than 12 bars of a song gone bad
I cried to you for mercy
It just made you wail so sad
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The wind comes a howlin down
The empty road I'm walkin on
These blues run up my bad luck day
The safety's broke and gone
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I tried to love the thought
That I wasn't walking with the dead
But no luck was mine sept bad
cause I was runnin with them instead
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Its late now you see
The yellow moon on the wane
and in the cold light of it
My song will be of pain
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I'm standin here at the crossroads
In the darkest hour of night
Please don't trade me here on the delta
Cause I am the bluesman of black light
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I dreamt of someone stealin my guitar. I awoke and it was gone!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 20 March 2019

beautiful poem; written beautifully- I tried to love the thought That I wasn't walking with the dead.../// enjoyed I to read this

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Geoffrey Fafard 20 March 2019

Cheers and thank you my fellow poet for taking the time to read and comment. Geoffrey.

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Diana van den Berg 21 January 2019

Kangaroos, flying foxes and the like (as per your comment) are among the greatest audiences anyone can have (and I say that in fervent sincerity) – you didn’t know but I was included in “the like” because I heard it too in all its quiver-melancholia in that deep dark, Australian night in the waning light of the yellow moon (all the way from South Africa) . Always wondered why I wasn’t born a tree, a mongoose or a butterfly or the like.

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Geoffrey Fafard 20 March 2019

Diana..its been a long time since I looked at this poem again. thank you for your inspirational remarks and I can see moonlit trees in your writing....! Geoffrey.

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Chad Storm 19 November 2017

Geoffrey, I love this poem.

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Geoffrey Fafard 19 November 2017

That is good to hear Chad...Thank you.Cheers Geoffrey.

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Rajnish Manga 26 August 2017

Geoffrey, this is my second visit to this poem and it seems more rewarding than the first. Thanks and Congrats.

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Geoffrey Fafard 27 August 2017

Rajnish. Thank you for taking the time to read this again. Cheers Geoffrey.

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Your poem makes me think of the musicians of NOLA..very colorful and soulful poem..

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Geoffrey Fafard 27 August 2017

Lorraine, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.Geoffrey.

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