spiritual seeker

Rookie - 138 Points (22-11-55 / Malaysia)

Blue Planet


Dad... see that bright orange star!
With several beautiful planets swimming around it!
Look! There among them, is a blue planet...
I wonder dad?
Who lived in that beautiful blue planet?
It look so peaceful... so graceful...
They must be the most lucky among all in this universe...
It looks like everything are in abundance there...
I'm sure there is no hunger,
No conflicts or war,
Who in their proper state of mind will want to destroy such a heavenly place?

Submitted: Friday, July 12, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, December 31, 2013

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My wish....My Dream...

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Jinal Oswal (4/14/2014 9:16:00 AM)

    The most wonderful thing is the universe... I started imagining the planet.. Serene and beautiful... It is a very good write :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (7/22/2013 4:53:00 AM)

    Uff, for a moment I was just floating in the sky with those stars and planets. U might have added some more lines...Its eternal, spoiling it....is like self destruction. Hope God is kind enough to send a savior very soon. Heavenly write and great 10. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,202 Points Hans Vr (7/15/2013 10:29:00 AM)

    Our blessings in this blue planet are so many, my Sufi brother.
    This poem brings us with our feet on the ground
    Let us keep beleiving in your wish, your dream.
    Somewhere deep inside of me, there is the conviction that our Creator has made this world not to let it perish in chaos but to let it flourish in kindness and harmony. Somehow we are on the path to this dream and wonderful poems like this one and the wonderful work you do in Belgaum are strong catalysts towards a world of peace and kindness.
    A great ten for this superb poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 673 Points Unwritten Soul (7/14/2013 1:06:00 AM)

    Dearly write, somehow i feel so calm reading this....Blue planet huh never going to Red planet hahahaha...
    Beautiful write_Soul (Report) Reply

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