Blue Moon Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Blue Moon Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Alluring Goddess

reigns over water and trees

witnessed reflection

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Kamran Haider 29 October 2008

wow... a myth in three smart lines... Great vision and style... Loved it...

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Chitra - 31 October 2008

a perfect setting for a surreal experience

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A lot of meaning in such little words great job Please take some time to read some of my poems try everyone turns away and all my life. I would be pleased if you have time to read even more i hope you enjoy them as much as i enjoyed yours. thank you

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Aijaz Asif 05 November 2008

In three lines the mystry of life is defined......10 very beautiful & deep write....i love it

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Allemagne Roßmann 24 August 2011

Happens once in a blue moon in the life of Satan who devours the moon thinking he to be the alluring Goddess undercover.Saturn remained gay forever and only your words satiate him in eclipses of life as it does for us readers.Well done.

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Alluring Goddess reigns over water and trees witnessed reflection.. short poem but big and impressive messagae.. well done dear...10 read mine moon, inflamed mind and i could hear

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Yelena M. 04 April 2009

A splendid image of the moon expressed in your lines! Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. A.

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Ria Villaflor 26 February 2009

Great piece. I love reading three line haiku. This is one of the best for me.

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Pink Butterfly ... 10 February 2009

An awesome piece! lovely words with deep meanings. Fantastic!

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