Blue Hawaiian Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Blue Hawaiian Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Bali Hai spirit

beckons me to leave the snow's

wonderland behind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 24 August 2011

Your words are too hot for the snow to melt away the readers.Global warming then will be drinking the wonderland.Very well done.

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Ben Gieske 12 June 2009

The best of two worlds, but this beckoning would not be hard to answer.

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Joseph Poewhit 07 January 2009

If it feels right do it

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