Blue Castle Poem by SALINI NAIR

Blue Castle

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A lazy breeze seek its way
Above the city saw green lines
That caught the eyes in solitude
Far ahead a lovely castle
That made out of crystals
Its pallid side shade some blue
Sometimes blue that accord
Those mirror the seas of earth
Dazzling abode of wonders
There a fairy opened that fort
Smile and faded at a glance
Some wicked may closed that fort
Spread the blues in that citadel
There saw a military move that side
But evaporated in seconds
There that nymph may mourn for awhile
As her tears sprinkled on land
In that tears bop whole nature
I am a loner beside as its witness! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Wednesday, September 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2014

A wonderful poem. Loved the lines...... Smile and faded at a glance Some wicked may closed that fort Spread the blues in that citadel There saw a military move that side A beautiful castle but lost its charm into tears when military forces reached the castle. Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2014

A symbolic poem, description of a beautiful place, beauty affected by military actions of rival forces.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 September 2014

There is always beauty phenomenal in blue castle............so nicely crafted

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Ramesh Rai 10 September 2014

Beautiful write expressing mirth of life.

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