Blue And Grim Poem by Friday, Happy Oyamenda

Blue And Grim

Rating: 4.8


Oh humming bird, hum not your song today beside my window on this forlorn-empty dawn; for the woman I love - the one before whose elegant feet my young heart is cast - thinks of someone else and not me. This makes me blue and grim. So dear humming bird - oh you whom nature has profusely lavished with the most splendid love that appears in your bright colours; the most perfect azure, the most beautiful gold, the most dazzling red, with such beautiful diamond eyes - go hum your love song elsewhere, for my heart is blue and grim...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Having fallen in love with a girl, who loved someone else, left sad for many weeks....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent poem Friday, gave it a ten and I can relate to it cause that's how I feel on the inside deep down right now, thnx for sharing

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Excellent poem Friday, gave it a ten it relates to me now as well because that a how I'm feeling deep down, thnx for sharing.

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Friday, Happy Oyamenda

Friday, Happy Oyamenda

Benin City, Edo State, Nigeria
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