Blown With The Wind Poem by Cynthia Aluning

Blown With The Wind

Rating: 5.0


You have taken my heart in your hands...
At first you were very gentle with it
But now you have left me with absolutely nothing
Nothing but a broken heart and shattered promises
Every commit you made had been broken
The wind is my sole witness...
For they carry with them all your lies and false dreams
Now I don't know if I could ever trust you again
For so long I waited and kept you in my heart
I never thought you would do anything to cause me hurt
I thought you loved me, at least that's what you claimed.
Then why am I sitting here all by myself?
And why am I having to put the broken pieces back?
Now you tell me if you want another chance...
How can I trust you again, to be true and sincere
You took me in once, twice, thrice, but let me go...
We were in love at least that's what it seemed
If that is what you think love is then, I don't want it!
Yes I loved you, I still do and I always will
But your love isn't unconditional like mine
You seem to fall in and out of love easy, at least you did with me.
So how do I know if you will carry my heart
Like it is fine china that you cherish?
You did really good at breaking my heart the first time
Then the second, then the third...I lost count
I've yet to collect pieces bit by bit
Can you put the memories back to make me complete?


*This is a narrative poem better off said than written, I wanted to convey its message, wanted it flow freely without minding the technical aspects...that's what we called, expression.
However, I experimented on rephrasing the poem with a more poetic touch. See it for yourself on the poem 'Swept'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Herbert Poetry 16 June 2015

I like it. This poem deserves 10

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Captain Herbert Poetry 16 June 2015

A very colorful poem like the rainbow rays

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Joseph Daly 09 December 2005

Superb, and to the point. A very human tragedy portrayed with excellenct mastery. It itself it works almost as a narrative; English is, obviously, not your Mother tounge, but the misuse of it adds ver much to your writing and especially this poem

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Cynthia Aluning

Cynthia Aluning

Metro Manila, Philippines
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