Blowing In The Wind Poem by Heather Burns

Blowing In The Wind

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Standing with arms
outstretched toward
heaven

leaves catch the sun
casting reflections

silver images dance
on their surface

branches hover together
creating an umbrella
of protection

listening to secrets
borrowed from the wind

whisper in my ear
share with me the magic
blowing in the wind.

Sunday, September 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 September 2014

Yes all day through trees outstretch their arms towards heaven and pray for mankind and wind is a witness to all these divine things..............Heather.......very nicely composed

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Paul Sebastian 29 September 2014

A beautiful picture of spring, the unfolding beauty in the wind! Great write. Enjoyed it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2014

whisper in my ear share with me the magic... nice one....10 share and take care to blow gently and happily

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Abekah Emmanuel 30 September 2014

I like the simplicity of your diction. You are able to incite passion in your readers by using few words. Thats good. keep writing, I like this one. Well done!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 September 2014

whisper in my ear share with me the magic Secrets of the universe are floating in space. Ear craves to pick the vibrations. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 02 May 2020

What a lovely well written poem. Touched me.

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A winning windy write my friend!

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 October 2014

A Beautiful write Heather. That's the beauty of wind which carries some secrets in air. We have to give a lending ear to hear the secrets it carries....Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 October 2014

A thoughtful poem, We always get something when we look upwards.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 October 2014

pictorial view of the poem superb the lovely style of Heather..as if supplicating.. morning with hope stood in front of the individual whole poem is symbolic leaves, silver image, branches, umbrella..lovely Heather I salute your art kudos

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