Blood Falling Poem by Harley Morriss

Blood Falling

Rating: 3.0


blood falling

loading bullets
party of beer
late night brawl
lie after lie
to much beer
brawl to far
loaded bullets

blood falling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rian Pongratz<3 22 February 2009

very nice i see what your trying to say

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Monkey Mendez 04 July 2008

A very good poem! But a useless way to spill! This character should donate b-cuz at least ya get money (lol)

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Amie-Lee ...... 24 March 2008

I agree. Good job. It proves that people should be careful after a few drinks.

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Maura Hunt 19 March 2008

ooo! i like this....short and to the point. Simple. I like it.

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