Blood And Tears Poem by May N

Blood And Tears



drops of crimson fall freely
spotting the floor randomly
trails of blood travel down
from the wound of my heart

drops of crystal streak my face
seeming to never end its course
fueled by the strong emotions
pounding away at my soul

as blood and tears combine
the sorrow it leaves behind
so strong and so powerful
leaving a mark to this world

running through the gutters
whisking away the filth
the filth you left behind
for me to suffer from

blood gushes from the wound
pulsing as it comes
mixing with the tears
from the unbearable pain

leaving a never-healing scar
on a broken-down soul
never to feel contentment
in the life you made to hell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ianne De Angel 09 December 2008

Amazing poem. I loved it. I really loved the fact of the sadness and darkness here. But I did not enjoy the rhymes... Try to get more. I think the piece are amazing, really deep. But the rhymes are not that good. It's just try to get it more that you will become an amazing poet. Great job. ^^

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May N

May N

Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
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