Bliss Bountiful Poem by Indira Renganathan

Bliss Bountiful

Rating: 5.0


To be blessed is to watch the trees
Their blossoms when they shed fresh
Chirrups and tweets metering coherent
Ecstasy-adorned mind sings forth joyously
This moment, this showering Bakula flowers
O'bountiful, bountiful..smitten and crazy

Carpeted aroma this tuned melodic to
Bharathi's once sung breezy dulcet words
'Eththanai kodi inbam vaiththaai-yengal
Iraiva, iraiva, iraiva'...and
Look, how my english spirit humming it
'Ho, bountiful happiness gifted Thee-our
God, o'God, o'God'..

And to continue when you ask me
Hunting my heart in this floral pleasance..
Out with those elysian words humming for you..

'Chiththinai achiththudan inaithaai-angu
Serum ayimbhoothathu viyanulakamaiththaai
Aththanai ulakamum varnakalanjiyam
Aaga palapala nal azhagugal samaiththaai'

'Soul in body infused-thereon
Founded five-elemental creations
All Thine nature arrayed colourful
O' plenteous beauty created Thee'

Now sweet little punches, Bakula commanding
And your anxious smile gestures 'sing'
Signing not to go abrupt..therefore

'Mukthi yendroru nilai samaiththaai-angu
Muzhudhinai unarum unarvamaiththaai
Bhakthi yendroru nilai vakuththaai-yengal
Parama, Parama, Parama'

'Salvation Thee classed up-thereon
To cherish bestowed the spirit on
Devotional trance Thee induced-our
God, o'God, o'God'

Now in her fragrant mood Bakula pouring, pouring
Let our perfumed hearts sing
'Yeththanai koti inbam vaiththaai...'
'Ho, bountiful happiness gifted Thee...'

Thursday, September 3, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2009

Subramania Barathy is the most celebrated poet of modern Tamil literature...you have very nicely and effectively combined some beautiful verses of the great poet in your well composed piece, Indira...thanks a lot...10

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Janice Windle 15 September 2009

This is a beautiful celebration in song. I don't understand the original words but it is lovely to read the sounds of the original language (is it Hindi, Urdu or Sanskrit - forgive my ignorance) alongside their English meaning.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 September 2009

Great descriptive poetry. Beauty, nature and Prakrithi and Audi Para Shakti, are all one and the same. When you see utmost beauty in nature, it means you are seeing the Ultimate Prakriti in it.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 September 2009

superb mam...i tried a few senryu with bharathiar's kavidhaygal...i myself was not satisfied..even bharathi tried translating his poems..which were not as good as his originals..bharathi's tamil had a power...you have chosen an apt poem and translated it beautifully along with your comments...excellently done mam...i was introduced to poetry by reading this great poet's poem...thanks for this wonderful job done...i could literally hear the song sung by m.s subbulakshmi...i take this into my favs

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