Bliss Poem by Amy Marie

Bliss

Rating: 5.0


Bliss is the one on a swing
Who feels her years breeze by.
She creates the sound of a bell
And doesn't even try.

She tastes a sunrise inside of her
Which looks like stars that went
To bow down to her gracefully
And give off an autumn scent.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bursting with beauty my friend.10/10

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Mar Cav 17 February 2010

What a sweet poem! Put a smile on my face!

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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

Wow! This is great? ? love how this feels as I read! :)

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Linnie 24 January 2018

i love this for linnei and enjoy it lv you

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 May 2017

Bliss compared to the sunrise inside.......... very nice imagination.. very nice poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Lynn Glover 20 January 2011

Very beautifully written, Any, as you seem to have the ability to draw the reader right into the poem. I could feel the breeze and hear the bell as I drifted through the peom. Great Job.

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Apothecary Montague 21 February 2010

wow, absolutely love this.

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