Blind Narcissus Poem by Richard Blanch

Blind Narcissus

Rating: 3.8


Waiting by the stairs, in the hall
Where the panelling is white
With moonlight: one vertical figure, black, upright
As principle.
Waiting in the leaves, as they blow,
Pile the voices of the night
On the paths: lone diffuse shadow, light, as low
As Longing.
Caught as in a trap, in the No
Of the creaking hallowed walls
The one turned to the leaded window pane, sure
He heard someone out there.
Scattered in a shower
Of passing breezes, shades of many forming one
Pepper with their glances the stone glowering down... Come

The day and each will see the other as reflections in the glass
Of the window, and forget- or shun
The half-knowing of memory- and let time pass.
Till. Spiky yew and churchyard dew under one
Headstone bury two, still wondering, at the last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Atina 30 April 2008

Intriguing title and poem Richard I especially liked 'The half-knowing of memory' Cheers Anita

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~ Jon London ~ 28 April 2008

Fantastic write, the visuals leap out of this fine poem great piece all the very best J.L

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 28 April 2008

I like this poem. It reminds me, indirectly, of my most recent submission. It's like Part Two of it..or something. Nice work, Richard.

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