Treasure Island

Jerry Lundeguarde

(New York City)

Blind Date


I lap up your lipstick.
Foaming sudsy oat
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  • Chinedu Dike (9/26/2014 4:49:00 PM)

    I like your writing stills, you encapsulate a whole idea in few words. A lovely poem you've got here, written in heightened language. Good. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Anthony Burkett (2/4/2014 10:00:00 PM)

    Fabulously descriptive! Reminding me of futility and frugality of emotion... of the wishing that one wasn't where one happened to be at the moment... I can relate heavily having just come from that place earlier this evening.... Very well penned... Touché Sir! (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (1/11/2014 2:08:00 AM)

    Have been reading your poetry tonight, get lost in some of it. The way you write, taking thoughts and putting them together
    eventually paints a picture at the end. Very nice. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
    (Feel free to read my poetry and comment if you'd like) . (Report) Reply

  • Ed Nigma (1/10/2014 11:24:00 PM)

    Haha this one was good too. Sort of reminded me of someone going on a date getting wasted remembering a kiss and some other moments then the rest of the moments are completely lost. locked away in the subconscious as you got to drunk to recall the rest of the date. Not saying that was the case here but that is what I took from it and it reminded me of some experiences like that I have had many years ago. (Report) Reply

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