Blind Date Poem by The Pundit

Blind Date

Rating: 3.9


I lap up your lipstick.
Foaming sudsy oat

meal then just burst
like that certain fire-

work in misty June.
My hands are quite

nervous, I completely
agree. Without you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anthony Burkett 04 February 2014

Fabulously descriptive! Reminding me of futility and frugality of emotion... of the wishing that one wasn't where one happened to be at the moment... I can relate heavily having just come from that place earlier this evening.... Very well penned... Touché Sir!

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Roseann Shawiak 11 January 2014

Have been reading your poetry tonight, get lost in some of it. The way you write, taking thoughts and putting them together eventually paints a picture at the end. Very nice. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Feel free to read my poetry and comment if you'd like) .

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