* * * Blind Bullet... Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * Blind Bullet...

Rating: 3.2


The moon was born again, so yellow...
And singing was slightly jealous...
Sometimes we confuse game rule...
For sweeting- soul we've blind bullet...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 25 November 2010

Great write with so few words. What a picture you can put forth just by words. Again another beautiful poem you write.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 May 2009

Fantastic composition, nice imagery.

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Fiona Davidson 25 April 2009

I came back to read your great poem again Tsira and found someone had rated it down to 7...I have broken my rule of not rating to boost it back up again as I think that was a very unfair rating.....Fi

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Fiona Davidson 25 April 2009

Another excellent write from you Tsira, , , great to read...Fi 10+++

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