Bleed Poem by Jessie Jett

Bleed

Rating: 5.0


Scratch my skin, scratch it please.
Scratch it so you will make it bleed.
Take my words, throw them down.
Take your words, they're the only sound.
To only your's is an understanding.
For only mine is just so demanding.
Scratch my skin, scratch it please.
Scratch it cause you make me bleed.
My thoughts and love,
They pour.
Love just pours,
out of all these gaping sores.
Take my words, lead them to contridict.
Take your words, an understanding tries to fit.
Scratch my skin, make it bleed.
Though in my heart to be let free.
My thoughts and love,
They pour.
Love longs pours
past all those gapping sores.
Take my words, hear my heart.
Take your words, we're reliving a start.
Take this skin, leave it at ease.
To stop it,
for I don't bleed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erica Santana 13 March 2012

Good poem well wrtten

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Connor Whyte 23 March 2012

This seems so sad but filled with powerful emotions that seem to complicate me. I find I can relate to it cause the feeling of pain hurts but the pain you feel inside your head hurts even more.

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Louise Crielly 22 March 2012

i LOVE THIS! i know it feels i used to be there and self harmed and reading this brings a tear to my eye

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Ace Of Black Hearts 19 March 2012

A ease of your suffering. A tissue to try to dry your tears. Some courage to overcome your fears. Love is always near. Even when it feels so far away. The day will not easily be forgotten. No matter what the phase of the moon. A fall and rise, as tides surmise. With a loss comes a gain. Freedom from pain. With invisible ink another name has written. Time to make decision. With heart plucking all the feathers of ugly duck. Trying so hard to see the beauty not yet their. What is underneath that you yet don't see. A question of ones inner self indeed. I would like say your poem inspired that and I would like to thank you for it. Yours is a wonder poem, full powerful emotions. Keep writing you have a knack for it.

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Nicholas Abaddon 15 March 2012

well wriiten...highly enjoyable =p

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Linda Maree 13 March 2012

the word that caomes to mine is wow....think ineed to read some more of your work.: -)

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