Blank Morning Poem by wabi sabi

Blank Morning

Rating: 5.0


once I got up
you were not in bed

I went downstairs
you were not there
a tea cup
warm

I got out of the house
hens have been fed
you are not there

woods rustle
pond rushes

I am alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2017

Nice feeling of eternal search.

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 March 2016

This poem is so vivid, and it conveys much more meaning and emotion than what apparently seem to be. A beautiful poem!

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Elena Sandu 04 February 2014

How beautiful you have shown thought without words. Thank you! Everything keeps going on despite being alone. Woods rustle, pond rushes, we keep doing our job, breathing...

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Elena Sandu 04 February 2014

How beautiful you have shown thought without words. Thank you! Everything keeps going on despite being alone. Woods rustle, pond rushes, we keep doing our job, breathing...

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 January 2014

the reality of modern life..Happy New Year wabi sabi..

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