! Blame It On The Moon Poem by Linda Ori

! Blame It On The Moon

Rating: 3.4


Mesmerized by moonlight
Such a lovely thought
Spinning webs of pure delight
With pen in hand I jot

Words of liquid silver
Pouring from my mind
Spilling out across the page
Their twisted tales unwind

Into a lovely tapestry
Of moonbeams bright as day
Brilliantly cascading
O'er each other as they play

Then suddenly in rhythm
The words begin to spin
And tumble from my fingers
Where no words before had been

A simple bit of magic sent
This poem from me to you
Mesmerized by moonlight
(And a little witches brew!)


3/22/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 22 March 2008

Looks like the moon's doing its job for a few of us Linda. Well-penned m'dear. Danny

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Suicide King 22 March 2008

A very descriptive and great of poetry.

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Ernestine Northover 22 March 2008

A bit clap from me Linda, I really enjoyed this poem, it is beautifully written and the flow is great. Well done. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 22 March 2008

These words that tumble through your fingers, bring a joy that always lingers! ! ! *10*! Best wishes! ! Friend Thad

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Mary Gordley 23 March 2008

What incredible flow this lovely poem has. Really wonderful job Linda! Thanks.

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Rani Turton 23 May 2008

'Words of liquid silver' and phrases like this have made this an incredibly elegant poem. Thanks Linda. We can blame it on the moon but also your undeniable talent as a poet.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 May 2008

too much mesmerization by the moon? but i wiil blame only you! 'their twisted tales unwind into a lovely tapestry'...good lines these. a very good enjoyable poem...

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Rose Falcone 30 April 2008

Dear Linda, I found myself swaying to the movement. Thank you for moving me, literally!

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R H 24 April 2008

An enchanting poem deftly penned with a touch of magic, a vision of wonder and an enviable flow that had me mesmerized. Love the visuals and movement you create here Linda - j x

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Alison Cassidy 30 March 2008

There is something delightfully theatrical about this one - with lights and beautiful costumes and music underpinning every stanza. A glorious piece of magic penned with wit and great style. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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