Black Widow Spider Poem by Keith Foley
Black Widow Spider
Black widow spider deceptive as can be,
embracing you in her arms while sucking life from thee.
Black widow spider keeps you close by her side,
now stripped of happiness, hope and pride.
Black widow spider pretends to be your friend,
if your with her very long, your life will never mend.
Black widow spider takes what she can,
leaves you worse than she found you, now your half a man.
Black widow spider smiles her pretty smile,
your poisioned by her beauty, entangled in her vile.
Black widow spider wraps you in her legs,
takes you down with her, to the deepest dregs.
Oh how cunning and deceptive, this one can be,
as she laughs her little laugh, while pulling your soul from Thee!
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black widow spiders are dangerous little creatures indeed, in theses parts of the world where i live we're lucky not to have them.nice poem man
after telling eloquently 'enough' of the black widow spider, the poem beautifuly ends- the phrase 'pulling your soul from thee'...good write, Keith...i liked 10
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4/23/2024 7:39:11 AM # 1.0.0.1119
It is so hard to believe you only started writing 2007. Your peoms are amazing. They captivate me. Well done. Really like this one alot.