Black Knots Poem by William F Dougherty

Black Knots

Rating: 5.0


[Moodpomes: Calendar of Correlatives]

At twilight scrawny starlings screech
like harpies hunting empty streets,

braid trees and ledges in high-pitched fuss,
knotting in rows at hollow dusk

like charcoal beads tightly queued
entreating night's protective hood,

unless a hawk-cry snaps their thread
and black beads scatter, half unsaid.




(Pub. in Descant, Texas Christian Literary Journal,
Vol.25, No.2.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jim Hogg 04 February 2013

Some talents when approached begin to look small after all, but yours, William F Dougherty, looms ever larger. And the more carefully I look, the more I see in your work - and I know there's still a lot more there to be discovered too by better minds than mine. Be well Mr Dougherty. This site needs you badly.

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William F Dougherty 18 October 2012

Appreciate comments. (Cardiac problem has slowed activity to a crawl.)

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Scotty Dogg 17 October 2012

I’ve read them all several times, so now I have to go back over. Good thing is, like all good art, we see it differently with every view. There’s always a surprise. I’m reading them to my 6 year old now, and he loves them. Big fan. I’d forgotten about this one. Read it a long time ago. The poem, like all good ones, runs in one’s mind like a good film. Pictures are formed in our brain. We like the birds. Care about them. We can know them. And, the poem is very short, yet tells us a story that could fill pages. Terrific piece of literature. I’m always a fan of “less is more” and this poem nails it!

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William F Dougherty 16 April 2012

Panic leaves prayer black beads unsaid

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