Black Heart Beat Red Poem by Silence Dogood

Black Heart Beat Red

Rating: 4.7


A tear that falls a scream that cries.
A smile thats false and a hidden lie.
A broken heart a laugh thats fake.
A secret lost a promise that'll break.
Why is everything so filled with sorrow.
Forget yesterday live for tommorow.
Cause thats all that matters is the day ahead.
Just keep waiting for your black heart to beat red

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ryan Thompson 05 September 2008

that was pretty -ryan

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Rik Bertrand 07 September 2008

Take this poem and live it, keep your spirits up.

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*Trusting You* 11 November 2008

A tear that falls a scream that cries. A smile thats false and a hidden lie. A broken heart a laugh thats fake. very good lines. good job. Becca

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Carrie Sprouse 11 October 2008

i like this one too, your a great poet for your age

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Leria Hawkins 18 September 2008

Another fine piece of poetry. Keep writing my friend, seems you have a gift! Regards, Leria

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iL-**Hazen.Winckler**- 15 September 2008

I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT....I'D HAVE TO AGREE WITH STEPHANIE....I WOULD NEVER BE ABLE TO WRITE AS GOOD AS YOU! YOUR WONDERFUL! ! .....AND I LOVE! HOW YOU WRITE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! EXCELLENT WORK! ! ! I GIVE IT A TEN! ! THE RYTHM IS PRACTICALLY COMING TO ME! ! IT'S GREAT! ! !

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Stephanie Fiddy 12 September 2008

wow! when i was 12 i never wrote like that! when you're my age you'll be a genius :)

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