Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 8,025 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Black-Eyed Susans For You, Susie...... [friends; Flowers For A Woman; Short] - Poem by Bri Edwards

Paul and I are not sure if the flowers’ “eyes” are truly black or brown,
but, if we could, we’d use a bunch of them....to fashion you a gown.
Then no matter what month it was, or wherever you might be,
you and Paul could look at you, in your gorgeous gown, and happy you could be.

.....well, you could imagine it at least....with no bees buzzing!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

i have a good friend, Paul, who has a good friend, Susie. i sent them my A Mouse In My Stomach poem not long ago and Paul said he liked it better than Susie did. (it WOULD take a certain kind of person to appreciate it) SO i asked what kind of poem Susie would like and i was told a poem about black-eyed susans. that is the story. they both struggle with mental health issues.

Comments about Black-Eyed Susans For You, Susie...... [friends; Flowers For A Woman; Short] by Bri Edwards

  • Veteran Poet - 1,214 Points Xelam Kan (7/7/2013 1:11:00 PM)

    The poet notes are more interesting and poetic than poem.....
    It seems your prefer prose-poetry (i'd call it)
    Good luck for Susan and Paul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 8, 2013


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