Black Box Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Black Box

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BLACK box spinning, toiling in your
head, struggle, focuse, before the
fat king forfeits your bed.
HOARD your laughter, give the pay
off to a saint, learn to vision, like
a artist lost at sea, .
BLACK box spinning, toiling in your
head.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 30 June 2006

thank god its black not blank...coz you can work on the black to add colour...but a blank on...you got nothing to work on...deep thought...great read...nalini

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Mary Nagy 30 June 2006

Why is it that sometimes your poems are so interesting they almost seem dizzying? Such a feeling of being out of control with this one. Great work David. Sincerely, Mary

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David.....The Abstracts that unfold in your work are of a muse to follow...The process of unfolding them, however, may be an impossibility as only you are in your own dreams...but the outcome, as you consistently exhibit, is most unique & inquiring...'''''''''''''''''''''''''frank

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