Bittersweet Poem by A.J. McKinley

Bittersweet

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Bittersweet
And I fell
Laughing, crying
Another song

Bittersweet
And then silence
Truth, justice
Going home

Bittersweet
And we kissed
Touching, taking
Seeking desire

Bittersweet
And I knew
Heartache, anger
Shameful release

Bittersweet
And I left
Alone, eager
Selfless acts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 26 March 2007

Excellent choice of title which repeats itself in each stanza. Very well executed.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 31 August 2006

that was cool the way you like wrote it i really liked it cool. Lylyanna

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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