Birthday Wish Poem by Concetta Salter

Birthday Wish

Rating: 4.5


This is what I long for;
The moments when you're near.
I hear a knock upon the door,
And go to see who's there.

On the other side you stand.
My palms begin to sweat.
Never have I met a man
Who makes me lose my breath.

I open up the door real slow.
I see your smiling face.
Outside it is very cold.
I let you in my place.

You wish me happy birthday,
Than you kiss my blushing cheek.
I feel my body shaking,
And my legs are going weak.

A friend is what you've always been,
But slowly I have found,
Only when you're near there's bliss,
And when you're not I frown.

My parents aren't home right now.
Its only me and you.
I feel I'm walking on a cloud,
but don't know what to do.

I start to look around my place.
Afraid that you might see,
see this look upon my face.
My love for you, it screams.

But then I feel a burning warmth.
Your hand upon my cheek.
I look to you, my thoughts they swarm.
My legs are getting weak.

You look at me as if to ask,
to ask if it's okay.
Talking seems too hard a task.
I nod and you obey.

Your lips descend upon my own.
So warm, so soft, so right.
The greatest birthday I have known.
You made my wish come true this night.

Sunday, July 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2014

This is the first of your poems that I've read, and I've liked it. The poem honestly describes the feelings of a 'wish come true'.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2014

This is the first of your poems that I've read, and I've liked it. The poem honestly describes the feelings of a 'wish come true'.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2014

This is the first of your poems that I've read, and I've liked it. The poem honestly describes the feelings of a 'wish come true'.

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