Birthday Gifts Poem by Jacqui Thewless

Birthday Gifts



on this grey morning
a bowl of sea-silver-winks
and trees holding shores;

a brown heart - broken
edge, locked, lovely, in a wall;
a scarf of warm wool

woven on Arran;
pennies from dad and heaven;
Richie Havens songs...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
nomad omnia 07 December 2010

Interesting structure, which works well to build the image and create the mood. A haze of sea-salt and winter coughs

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