Birth Day....(My Friend's Birth Day) Poem by Abdu Hoo

Birth Day....(My Friend's Birth Day)

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Birth Day....(my friend's birth day)

shiddath se tha muntazir voh apne janam din ka,
milega kuch aisa thohfa, hoga farhat e jan o dil ka...

baharon ke vo din aakhir khushee khushee aaj aahigaya,
aaya ek lifafa break up likha huva aur tasveer toote huve dil ka....

qismat e bashar salamath, dekho vo kaisey khushee manaye,
youm e viladath jis kee banjaye youm e tafreeq dil ka...

Birth Day....(My Friend's Birth Day)
Friday, August 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: break up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2016

See, how happiness is celebrated and during break up this still gives little sorrow. Birthday brings happiness and still we wish all the best. Wishing your friend and you a very happy birthday. Wisely penned poem this is...10

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Abduhoo Salamath 27 August 2016

thank you V much mr. Mahakul.

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Nosheen Irfan 04 September 2016

Oh that happens in life. So ironic. Sometimes fate kills our happiness. Beautifully rendered, the pain of separation.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2016

Oh Afsos wali B'day lekin shairi wah khoob, . Very nicely written. Thumbs up again.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2016

Kushiyaan mananey ka vakth aur bhi ayengey Yeh toh sirf vakth ka khel hai bas aagey chaltey jayiye! Beautiful write. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Abduhoo Salamath 03 September 2016

thank you very much for your nice comments..

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M Asim Nehal 29 August 2016

Tute dil se bhi dua'a nikle ye kamaal hai....Behte Ansuon mein bhi khushi chalke ye bemisaal hai Dard hote hue bhi Kisi ki hansi mein sharik hona ye Kabil-e-Taareef hai....10++

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Abduhoo Salamath 31 August 2016

SHUKRIYAA JANAB..

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Akhtar Jawad 27 August 2016

A shocking birthday but fruitful as it inspired to write such a lovely poem.

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Abduhoo Salamath 28 August 2016

thanks for comment sir...

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