Birds Fly Poem by Tom J. Mariani

Birds Fly

Rating: 5.0


A little too tall for me
Beautiful flowing hair
Over a tailored jacket

Purse and matching - - - - - -

Those long legs
Then she turned
I saw the face with

The same sharp crisp lines
The rest of her had promised

She went walking by - - - - -
Not for me
Just to get by

The strides

The way her jacket swung
Draping her as she walked

It was like watching a bird
Through your shaded window
As it pauses on your lawn

Unless something makes a noise
Then birds fly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 14 December 2007

I like the first part of this with its flow and swing and pauses. Don't know exactly what to make of the comparison with the bird and the noise.

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Tom J. Mariani

Tom J. Mariani

San Francisco, CA
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