Bird Eat Bird World Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Bird Eat Bird World

Rating: 5.0


You say it's a dog eat dog world?
I say that's just absurd.
I've never seen a dog eat a dog,
but I have seen a bird eat a bird.

Bird Eat Bird World
Monday, March 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: horror,death,life,life and death,nature,birds
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written 28 January 2015
Recife, Brazil

It took me 17 tries to finally load the picture on this poem!
Sometimes this website works perfectly, and other times it is so frustrating!
02 Mar 2015 17: 25
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2015

A pathetic scene you have nicely envisioned.Your photo attached to it reacts the eyes and mind. Many thanks dear Barney.

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Mj Lemon 08 March 2015

Wow...with the photo...the poem becomes both light and dark. It is mix of gothic and grotesque...Just excellent...A 10! Chien mange chien indeed.

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Lorraine Colon 03 March 2015

I love birds, but this shatters me. But is it really surprising? This is nature at its most perplexing. The killer bird was probably hungry, so he took himself a meal. Out of necessity, it's almost forgivable. But man kills man for insane reasons, and most of the time, not out of necessity.In my own backyard, I have seen small birds fall prey to hawks, so it is not unusual. I do like your poem, Kim, and the photo fits perfectly.

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Raymond Farrell 04 May 2015

Wow, the poem and the photo together bring home to a person. Very poignant and well written.

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Bri Edwards 14 April 2018

i see i have a typo in my 2nd comment below (the one from 2016) . oh well, i'm not ALWAYS perfect. just most of the time! i enjoyed this once again. thanks. to MyPoemList if it 'ain't' there already. bri :)

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Akhtar Jawad 06 April 2018

If not physically, mentally and monetarily, man also eats man.

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Diane Jessen 25 March 2018

Just today, my husband came in and said a hawk had killed another of our doves. That's the second one in about 2 days. The heads of both doves were torn off. Yes, what a bird-eat-bird world. You poem sums it all up very succinctly. Good job.

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Bri Edwards 03 June 2016

This looks like a 'crow's saw in Berlin. Bri

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A picture is worth a thousand words. We do live in a bird eat bird world. You have changed the landscape of our expression with this real poem!

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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