Billy....Upon Your Neck. Poem by Viola Grey

Billy....Upon Your Neck.

Rating: 2.8


I can't seem to move my eyes
from that place
upon your neck,
where a blood screaming pulse
sings my name.
I know your lips are moving,
but the deep vibrating words
are falling upon deaf ears,
I simply cannot hear you.
My hungry eyes are devouring
the sweet, salty sensation
of that heartbeat invitation
upon your neck.

15/2/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Wells 17 February 2009

Lucky Billy! Rock on, Green eyes!

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*Trusting You* 09 June 2009

creepy but very cool... I like this a lot.. I will put this into my favs... yes very well done.. great job. Becca

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Viola What a delicious invitation to get. You certainly have me wondering how it went. Excellent poem as usual. Karin Anderson

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I simply cannot hear you. ...................that's what its about having taste buds flooded over with manna dews and stifling hunger for more... madness its madness and nothing else

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Fiona Davidson 23 February 2009

Brilliant write Viola...full of images...thouroughly enjoyed it...thank you...Fi 10+++

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 20 February 2009

Awesome poem. Keep it up.

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