jonathan Juarez

Rookie - 70 Points (Orange CA.)

Big Pang - Poem by jonathan Juarez

Which ways go the windy with your relay
The hours fly by they are always right
You still don't believe in real-time web feeds
Ancient television static is not safe as well
You read daily those words yours Gods
I stop, wondering how nothing stares like nothing
Clouds hover inside the clear sky everyday
You easily forget where we are, so you tear our place apart.

Comments about Big Pang by jonathan Juarez

  • Freshman - 554 Points Patti Masterman (5/28/2012 1:16:00 PM)

    It feels like it's fast paced (like trying to keep up with someone, you don't know what he's going
    to do next- or what he will tear up in the next five minutes?) Anyway, I like it. Your lines have
    this feeling as if they have a secret embedded beyond the words meaning (like that code device
    in, is it Angels and Demons? I forget what it's called. Oh it's called a Cryptex. :) http: // (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 28, 2012

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