I was just thinking about the day
that I blew part of my hand away.
September twenty, sixty-three:
that day will live in infamy.
Fireworks should be handled with care
and on that day I couldn't spare
the time to do things right,
which led to my sad plight.
Confused was I after the blast;
how did it all happen so fast?
I'm standing back some twelve feet now
from the explosion site, but how?
Some water running, I can hear;
must turn the tap off, should be near.
There is no tap; it is the sound
of my own blood splashing the ground.
I panic now, am filled with fright;
my mangled hand a gruesome sight.
Two perfect hands I had before,
but that shall be the case no more.
No nine-one-one; does not exist;
I wrap a cloth around my fist
and hold it tight - - can't stand this heat!
A car is flagged down in the street.
A helpful driver we have found,
willing to take us all around.
The first hospital turned us away;
We have no doctors here, they say.
And so across the town we fly;
another clinic we can try.
There finally we find success;
they put me under, now I rest.
That man who drove us all about
was Heaven-sent, there is no doubt.
The hospitals were very far;
would not have lived without that car!
The years have passed, and I reflect
on treating fireworks with respect.
We get shorthanded here in the fall
and I'm the most shorthanded of all.
Incredible story, Kim. No doubt you study the hand, as much for the memory of its past as for its anatomy. (My major was anatomy and physiology in college) Wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing
I thought the title was familiar. I occasionally study my various scars. Oddly, they bring back mostly fond memories
I think one comment was jsut sent prematurely. I guess no one can now accuse you f bing 'heavy-handed', but maybe 'under-handed'?
Hey Hairy-palmed Kim, Great Poet's Notes, and 'cute ending to poem. Yes,20 y.o. children. That's what you GOT for scaring maid.
Wow, this is quite a tale and well told - both in the poem and in the note! What an experience. You were very blessed to survive!
The story without the rhyming cannot hold a candle. Good boy. The pace the excitement are missing in the other version.
Oh.... My....! This is so terrifying and sad! Reading your other poem, I thought much of it was fictional! Now I realize how horrible the accident has been! I can imagine the trauma and ordeal you underwent! By God's grace, no other vital part of your body was involved. Accidents can happen anytime.Miracles too.... It was providential that you got a driver to take you and the doctor finall y conceded to do everything possible to save your life.! This is indeed an incredible story of agony and endurance. But I appreciate your spirit to say that now your work is lighter and you need clip the nails of just eight fingers! That's how we should look upon life! Top marks!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Kim...Wow! Yes, I can relate to some of this...How do these things happen so fast? Why can I remember so many details, right down to seeing (in my mind) the event, years later...but I can't remember what I had for lunch yesterday? This poem is just...wow. A great piece.