Bi-Polar! ! ! ! ! Poem by Ryan Frenrey

Bi-Polar! ! ! ! !



Breath in, Breath out
Breath in, Breath out
Breath innnnnn, breath out....phewww

I must be in love with my sickness
I feel like a little kid on Christmas
Loving every moment I feel so enlightened
But I know the other end and it's quite frightening

As I raise my head high where ever I go
I feel like I saved the world and I'm a superhero
Who needs drugs when you feel this great inside
I'll turn my body inside out, because I have nothing to hide
But I have to remember where theres goodness theres sadness
And where theres sadness there has to be Madness!

Breath in, Breath out
Breath in, Breath out
Breath innnnn, ahhhhh

My face turns bloodshot scarlet
Veins bust out my skull as if they may fall out
Crying inside to release this anger inside
This is what happens when good and evil collide!

As people start falling soundly all around
Nothing but my bullet shells ricocheting off the ground
Alls I need now is to collect a little peace of my mind
But if you turn my body outside in, theres no soul to find
I've fallen again so deep and now I'm out of control
I can't manage this nonstop sickness thats Bi-Polar!

Breath in, and Breath out
Just Breath out!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vonda Overlie 09 October 2008

I understand! You are not alone.

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Dark Queen 04 April 2008

thank you for this. im bi polar and understand this completly

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Chris Mendros 17 September 2007

inside-out, outside-in, a frank self-assessment. Nice work.

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Stef Mighty Moshin Emo Rangers 13 September 2007

wow...great poem...ima show it to my friend who REALLY IS bi-polar...i mite be bi-polar but its not a fact just an opinion, ive taken like 10 tests, and suprisingly all of them tell me to go see a doctor cos i seriously mite have a bi-polar disorder, but my mom is a christian and feels that i act the way i act cos i want to, but really i just cant controll it...

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Amie-Lee ...... 11 September 2007

Hey there. I really liked this poem. I'm a sufferer of bi-polar depression, and I really felt that this poem knocked the feeling right on the head. Keep up the good work :)

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