+++ Beyond The Hill Top Poem by Dr subhendu kar

+++ Beyond The Hill Top

Rating: 5.0


oh what a idyll when flows by the heart
bright sun shine when touches the tuft
warmth still expands into the whole being
rhythm innate swaddles across the cornfield

breeze wakes the green from the shadow of dream
hope when bestirs with gleams of besotted blue
it is yet bright hours burning so brilliant
sky seems to be deep blue beyond the hill top

birds around chirrups by the blemishes of fear
frivolity of running fountain cascades somewhere
night still waits in its deep sleep yet undislodged
moon may come to glimmer the rainbow juxtaposed

heart when cries to meet the night in its dream
fragrance diffuses yet by the thin air into the plume
sea overwhelms somewhere on the beach of passion
when splashes sprucing the skin by the light of desire

wave of mirth still splashes by the joy of the sea
heart when revels to the waving sea
blood flows in scarlet red by the heart
smile and joy when cascades by the life
love still glows heart when walks in unison

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorothy- A. Holmes 07 June 2008

Dr. Kar, I appreciate the passion of your writing...perhaps I have said this before...truth can be repeated again and again Most Sincerely, Dorothy Cynthia

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Catherine Rica Cosico 07 June 2008

Love still glows when walk in unison... like meteor showers in the horizon full of love and passion warmth is still their confession Great work Dr. Cate

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Alison Cassidy 01 June 2008

Your poem explodes in a rainbow of emotions across the page. Love and beauty coalesce in this passionate expression of life and the wonder of the natural world. Your poetry is inspiring. Your joyful use of words continues to impress. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Thad Wilk 31 May 2008

A very touching write, sprinkles of love in each line, great read Dr. Kar! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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