Beyond Charlotte's Web Poem by Micah Krahn

Beyond Charlotte's Web



Beyond the slithering ascending shadows of the barn rafters, divulged an ideal refuge for the constellation of endless webbing which barraged between each beam.

Vast canvases of web glimmered in the silver moonlight, each silky durable line spun out reverentially twisting into a fine threaded mesh.

Gracefully descending from above the joists from a single flawless silky strand revealing a most beautiful creature; a spider, her long delicate legs humbly caressing the beauty deep within her confines of her own masterpiece.

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by Micah Krahn
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Bri Edwards 15 February 2014

i'm not sure i 'like' your use of barraged BUT i am not the poet of B.C.W.! i copied this: bar·rage b?'räZH/ noun noun: barrage; plural noun: barrages 1. a concentrated artillery bombardment over a wide area. synonyms: bombardment, cannonade; More gunfire, shelling; salvo, volley, fusillade; historicalbroadside an artillery barrage a concentrated outpouring, as of questions or blows. she was not prepared for his barrage of questions synonyms: deluge, stream, storm, torrent, onslaught, flood, shower, spate, tide, avalanche, hail, blaze; More abundance, mass, profusion a barrage of criticism verb verb: barrage; 3rd person present: barrages; past tense: barraged; past participle: barraged; gerund or present participle: barraging 1. bombard (someone) with something. his doctor was barraged with unsolicited advice Origin mid 19th cent.: from French, from barrer ‘to bar, ’ of unknown origin. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i DID like the constellation of endless webbing - - - - - - - - - - - this: reverentially twisting into a fine threaded mesh. made me do some research online: rev·er·ent 'rev(?) r?nt, 'rev?rnt/ adjective adjective: reverent 1. feeling or showing deep and solemn respect. a reverent silence synonyms: respectful, reverential, admiring, devoted, devout, dutiful, awed, deferential More a reverent silence Origin late Middle English: from Latin reverent- ‘revering, ’ from the verb revereri (see revere) . ya know, Micah, for the last fifty years+............. i've held the belief that when the Boy Scout Law stated that a scout is: trustworthy loyal helpful friendly courteous kind obedient cheerful thrifty brave clean (and) reverent .....the Law was saying 'reverent' to God and, thereby, that a Scout is a believer in God. since those days i have lost the belief in God, and now the boy scout organization has a very loose interpretation of what 'religious' beliefs a scout should have [not to mention, though i just did, that the organizations is now more accepting toward participation by gays; i wonder how many of our leaders and scouts were gay............hmm? ; good for BSA! on both counts]. now i see the definition and realize they might not have been referring to reverence for God at all! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Gracefully descending from above the joists from a single flawless silky strand revealing a most beautiful creature ...........the wording here seems a bit improper. is there such a thing in poetry as improper? ? ? AND in a spider, her long delicate legs humbly caressing the beauty deep within her confines of her own masterpiece. ..........how about the confines? ok; use her' if you wish! ! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i liked the alliterations or alliteration-like sounds made by: slithering ascending shadows and barraged between each beam. very nice! :) thanks for sharing. i have two poems dealing with spiders in showers, bathroom showers. bri :)

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