# Beware, I Am On My Way Poem by Mamta Agarwal

# Beware, I Am On My Way

Rating: 2.8


Morning rays
Light up the brilliance
of diamond jewels,
As it moves, draped
in diaphnous robes.

Curvaceous, heaving
Its bosom like a siren,

A wanton woman,
Trying to ensnare
A gullible victim,
Paying standing ovation,
With longing in his limpid eyes,

Watching from the sidelines.
Comely, willowy
Gracefully undulating,
Today rain or shine

It flows,
With determination
Enjoying the journey;
On its destination
To merge its identity
With the one
who has waited
an eternity;
the mighty ocean.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 17 October 2008

A journey, towards destination, on the way... with diverse... A beautiful poem.10 for it.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 October 2008

a good imagery using the glittering river and ocean...tantalising womanhood in ultimate 'confluence' with manhood...good imaginative write, enigmatic though 10

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 October 2008

Difficult one.........Very deep and meaningful

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Raj Nandy 10 October 2008

There is music, rhythm, color and paint in this poetic composition! Why not try also short stories to unburden your poetic vision? ! 10/10 -Raj Nandy

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2008

New ammmmazing taste have got from this one. chosen words are fine! ........10+

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