Between Us Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Between Us

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Between us
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Is this a thorn?
Or is this a thistle
Or is this a nettle
I know not my dear
When in between us
I see there is a quarrel
Inconceivable it is
When I see clouds pass by
Far above in limitless sky
Thus I wonder why in impatience
And fail to make any sense
Annoyances are but likely to stay
If life not lived together
With harmony and happiness
And here comes forbearance
To live life harmonious
Why can't life be like clouds?
And with patience pass the gamut
Instead of being marooned in a island
If in every rose we find a thorn
There can't be grins any more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 07 October 2014

awesome write.................If in every rose we find a thorn There can't be grins any more..............we.should be like clouds.................................

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Valsa George 06 October 2014

Annoyances are but likely to stay If life not lived together With harmony and happiness If life is not lived together, between people especially between husband and wife, annoyances are likely to occur and stay for long! Our life is to be lived in harmony and the happiness arising from it! A very meaningful write!

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Heather Wilkins 05 October 2014

why can't life be like clouds and with patience pass the gamut instead of being marooned in an island nice written sometimes I wonder too

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 October 2014

If life not lived together? then what happens next all can imagine. Live life between us harmonious which is very much important and unique poem of awareness. Realized in better way and explained well. Nice job and beautiful poem.

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