abhilash fraizer

Rookie (8-6-1975 / Cochin, Kerala)

Between the islands


A raindrop fell between us.
And swelled between us;
And we became two islands
With a river running between us.
Every morning, in the river
I saw your eyes, swollen with tears.
And I wished I had a boat
To sail across the river
And haven on your shores.
Or rather the rain pours to the full,
Drowning my island and yours
And make us one, one single Sea!

Submitted: Monday, March 28, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (10/4/2013 1:35:00 AM)

    Abhilash the poem is really very good. Keep going. I loved it. Have rated your poem.

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