Betty Poem by Jacqui Thewless

Betty

Rating: 3.2


I never saw your dad -
hard, dark
at yon hot
Stirling foundry -
digging your pit
in sand and
pouring your dangerous metal,
hell’s-bells bent
over
your cradle..

I heard
of your dear old mum’s
closeness extolled in sounds
of your towered soul -
near, pure, like water
in a bowl
of glass.

That bell cast
at your birth
is still singing
in peals
of your girlish laugh

though I
envisage you
swinging freely -
free! free!
over all of your kin –
and hear your own top-notes
ringing, bright, braw Betty.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Garnet Robbie 14 October 2009

this peels out powerful cultural sounds

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nomad omnia 21 August 2009

A sharing of a life like this make it immortal. Tae Betty :) N.

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