Better Then Me Poem by Nicholas Abaddon

Better Then Me

Rating: 5.0


I really miss that look in your eyes
That one that seems to be holding a secret
The way you smiled over at me
I really miss your seeing your face

How could you have stayed so long?
After all the lies I used to say
And all of the things i used to do
I think it's because you are so much better than I.

I miss your touch,
so warm and full of love.
That one thing i could never tell you i had.
I'm glad you left because your better than me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 04 April 2012

It is not that she is better than you but that she was totally different and most likely you did things to her that she no longer could tolerate. The irony of life is that many times we don't really appreciate the good people we share precious moments with until it is too little, too late. Well, this is the ways we learn from our mistakes and then move on toward new horizons! This is a well penned and poignant write that clearly shows your honest feelings and writing skills to freely translate those events of yesterday! Your poetic talent is clearly shown in this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You, Nicholas! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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