Better Place Poem by melissa dixon

Better Place

Rating: 2.5


i'm lying on the ground
looking up at the sky
i feel the wind blow my hair
and my body starts to rise

i see a beautiful angel in the distance
i felt her grab my hand
ane led me to a place far away
were my pain finally went away

i start to cry
'cause im finally in a better place
were i can be happy
and feel no pain

im somewhere i feel safe
and can never be hurt
i dont have to scream to feel better
'cause im happy
were the beautiful angel led me
to live a happy and painless life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mona Martinez 27 April 2009

wow. now that was the coolest poem i ever read.

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Mona Martinez 27 April 2009

wow. now that was the coolest poem i ever read.

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White Slash 28 December 2008

i feel the wind blow my hair and my body starts to rise good lines. this is really good. cool images... I liked it alot. everyone needs to be happy even down here. job well done. Andy

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Sabrina Jubahar 22 December 2008

'I dont have to scream to feel better' Great line. we do scream sometimes, just to feel 'something'. Thanks

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