Treasure Island

Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Better Decisions


Out of shower
I looked outside
Cloudy and foggy
I clearly thought.

Better not go out
I thought inside
Same old routine
Glued to the tv.

Show after show
Weather at a glance
Forecast for the day
Was calm and dry.

What I concluded
From the frosty window
Was totally wrong
Should’ve gone outside.

Observe closely
One more time
Better decisions
Will follow then.

Submitted: Sunday, May 05, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, March 05, 2014

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  • David Wood (5/7/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    I also think what they put on daytime TV is rubbish, and the weather forecaster is telling me its raining when I look out of the window it isnt! ! I like your poem. (Report) Reply

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