Betrayed As You Kiss Me Poem by D.J. Ray

Betrayed As You Kiss Me

Rating: 4.5


i kiss you
your body relaxing
as your soft lips pull me in
muscle hard as rock
turns to jelly
i let my guard down
but i know someday i'll get betrayed

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this poem deals wityh trust, as you kiss this girl your not to sure of it because you think you may geyt betrayled. wonderful poem. realationships should deal with trust, and withou that you really dont have anything. so before you do anything, make sure you can trust them. if you cant all your doing is setting youself up for hear break. wonderful job. i loved it. i give this a 10.

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D.J. Ray

D.J. Ray

Jonesboro AR
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