Betrayed Poem by dy.sin the writer

Betrayed



i told my eyes to say nothing
my tongue to blink i'm better
without you
i trained these hands to sing
you goodbye
in the most awful tune
i begged my body to lie
you away
yet here you are to stay
and i'm scrambled
like the morning eggs
i will happily cook for you

Betrayed
Friday, November 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,happy,love,love and life,relationships,heartache,heartbreak,confusion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 25 November 2016

An interesting, imaginative poem, where you have body parts doing thins they can't (the eyes talk, the tongue blinks, etc.) . I like it, especially the ending: and i'm scrambled like the morning eggs i will happily make for you I have one that is similar in some ways. You might like my poem 'Do Something Different'.

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Dy.sin The Writer 25 November 2016

I just read your poem and absolutely love it! It immediately put me in a place that's oddly comfortable and every bit exciting.

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