Beside The Glasses Poem by soorya neelacantan

Beside The Glasses



The great rain
Made the
Bird's brain
To sit behind
The window
Grill.

The waste food
There made
The hungry
Bird eat
The taste, good.

The shadow of the
Bird reflected in
The window glass
Made it ready to
Fight with the
Reflected claws.

The bird quarreled
As well as
The shadow quarreled
They beat each other
With their
Feet to teach other

The shadow
On the window
Didn't have
A single sign
Of a little pain
But the bird
Was sore bad
And feathers
Were wore sad

The bird accepted
The defeat
But the shadow
On the window
Was not there
To defeat.

Shadow of
The bird
Was not
At all there
As The owner
Of the house
Opened the
Glass window.
Door and pour
Some water
On the eater
Which flew
Away sadly

The bird had a class
Dashing on a glass!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The foolish bird in this poem had gone nuts... it tries its best to overthrow the other one... may it be grown selfish.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The attempts are in the right direction and young poets like you have to read further to equip themselves with the poetic devices. Please, edit the third line in the fifth stanza.

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Soorya Neelacantan 06 August 2012

thanq. i will be writing more online in future... my blog address is saisoorya.wordpress.com

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Tamilnadu, India
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