Beneath My Rock Poem by David Ratcliffe

Beneath My Rock

Rating: 5.0


Ought I not to hide beneath this rock
remaining still though barely safe
from all who mock and snide my worth
to cause this frown upon my head

So simple a man bereft of touch
who tugged the bell outside the gates
in search of love and closeness felt
but found superbia's vile embrace

Oh laughter meant as something true
would be divine to ears that bleed
from laser stares that fiercely burn
a hole into my emptiness

Alas I falter here alone
afraid to face what lies in wait
beyond the blindfold and restraints
I tied myself to save concern

Ney pity me not for I'm content
to wallow and to bide a while
afraid not I of loneliness
for solitude protects my pride

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 03 October 2013

come out from behind that rock and face tomorrow a good write

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Clifton Redmond 02 October 2013

A brilliantly scribed masterpiece, just perfectly described with some serious depth and left me rather reeling.

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David Ratcliffe 19 September 2013

Written when in a low state of mind and with no perceivable way out. Alone and left to rot with the only place to hide is beneath my rock

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